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How can you research characters if they doesn’t exist?

March 2, 2022 by Mo Fanning Leave a Comment

Creating characters

One of the hardest parts of writing characters is getting the balance right. It’s indisputable that anyone who creates a character puts something of themselves into their work. Their habits, beliefs, unconscious bias and prejudices will inevitably surface.

But that’s fine, because when you write well-rounded characters, the details of your own life add vibrancy and authenticity.

But there is a risk. In early drafts of my next book, I made my characters too much like me. They were thin and two dimensional, and didn’t have that necessary X factor that makes them someone the reader would want to engage with. Someone whose life is changed by the events around them. Someone caught up in a bigger drama.

So how do we avoid that trap?

Researching characters

When writing, I spend a fair bit of time researching the places I am talking about, the issues I want to surface, buildings, streets, cities, towns. But I also research the people I create.

That might sound weird. How can you research someone who doesn’t exist, who you just made up? I spend weeks getting to know these characters and deciding what makes them tick. Sometimes those weeks end with me deciding not to go forward with their application to play a role in my story.

Each character study is a set of behaviours, a set of habits. Each person has a history, a past, hopes and dreams, friends and enemies. They’ve all had to make difficult decisions and mistakes.

Going inside

To get the balance spot on, a writer has to go inside themselves and think about the things that make them into the person they are. Their foibles and flaws and idiosyncrasies. Things that they wish they could change about themselves. Things they are proud of, and the kind of person they aspire to be.

I try to think about my values, what I would do in someone else’s shoes. I sit in the character’s head, and work out what they are thinking given what I’ve found out in my research. What are their problems, and how could I reach into their skull and solve each one.

How do you create your characters?

Filed Under: Writing Tagged With: Characterisation, Research, Tips, Writing

A dark romance I wrote today

February 22, 2022 by Mo Fanning Leave a Comment

New York Romance

It’s been a while since I’ve released a book. People have been asking me when the next one is coming out, and today, I’m excited to announce that my new dark romance novel will be out towards the end of this year.

New York CityThis new book is special to me because it’s set in a city I fell in love with: New York. I’m still trying to decide on the final title – there are several in contention – and my beta readers are hard at work telling me what’s wrong. (Yes, I take feedback very seriously!)

It’s the story of a father who lost touch with his gay son due to words spoken in haste and his journey to reconnect. The main character, Silas, is an interesting man who weeds gardens and (once a year) dresses up as Santa. I’m sure you’ll love him as much as I do!

What they said about ‘Rebuilding Alexandra Small’

I’ve also received some wonderful feedback from my readers on my most recent book. Here are a few testimonials:

“A book that was easy to get into from the star.”

“Told in a chic lit format but with a gritty core”

“Witty and fast-paced”

“A lovely, fun, summery read that’s also smart and moving. Definitely laugh out loud so don’t say I didn’t warn you”

OK, so I’m shamelessly plugging my new book. But please buy a copy of my earlier books as well! They’re all available on Amazon and make great gifts for the romance reader in your life. Thank you for your support!

 

Filed Under: New York, Rebuilding Alexandra Small, Reviews, Tips, Writing Tagged With: Comedy, New York, Rebuilding Alexandra Small, Romance, Story, Writing

Generating ideas for writing a novel

February 14, 2022 by Mo Fanning Leave a Comment

New York writing

When I came up with the idea for my next book, I had to decide if I was up to the job of writing the story of a 67-year-old New Yorker. A Jewish man.

I wasn’t sure if I was up to the task, but decided to give it a try. It would mean a lot of research, but that was okay. I was feeling motivated.

I started by creating a character sketch, including all the details I needed to know about him. My new character was born and raised in New York. He was a guy who looked after gardens in the summer and worked as a department store Santa once a year. He lived alone in a one-bedroom apartment.

I was at a loss as to how to move forward with my character sketch. I didn’t want to write about a 67-year-old dying of cancer and loneliness, but I didn’t want to write about a man who was in perfect health. There wasn’t much drama there. This character is not a new one. He’s been in my head for months.

Writing away from the obvious

I decided to take my character sketch and turn it into a story about a man who is having a health crisis. After a small heart ‘incident’, he’s been warned to change his diet and lifestyle. That helped me decide how he’s a man who doesn’t like to be told what to do, who decides to ignore his doctor’s advice. What happens next? Will he live to regret ignoring the doctor’s advice? Or will he be alright?

I had no idea where the story might take me. I wasn’t sure if it would be a romance with a happy ending. It could end in a heartwarming way. It could go in quite a different direction. In the end, I was happy with the outcome. I have loved writing this book.

The first draft took two months. I set to work writing another draft, then sent the story out for feedback. I felt confident about the story, but didn’t want other eyes to see something I’d missed. This produced some good feedback from trusted friends, but also from a few honest readers who liked the story and suggestions. because the last thing I want is to be cancelled, I arranged a sensitivity read that helped open my eyes to unintentional bias.

I feel good about this book. I can’t wait to share it with you. If you’re an author, I hope you find my story helpful. If you are a reader, I hope you enjoy this story.

What are you working on? What do you hope to achieve with your next story? How did you get to where you are? Share your journey with me in the comments.

Filed Under: New York, Tips, Writing Tagged With: New York, Story, Tips, Writing

How to Pitch Your Story in Just 20 Words

February 12, 2022 by Mo Fanning Leave a Comment

Pitch your novel

One of the hardest parts of selling a new story (to a reader, an agent or a publisher) is coming up with what us marketing geeks call ‘The Elevator Pitch”. It’s also called a log line. It’s your whole story (80k+ words) boiled down into one sentence. Two at most. And coming up with a pitch that works is a journey into hell.

“A young boy wizard comes of age” might be pretty generic, but isn’t too shabby as an elevator pitch.

The words you string together need to tell your story in one breath. They ideally need to suggest conflict. And they definitely need to get the person reading them excited.

Pitch conflict

We’ve all sat through meetings or watched insanely detailed pitches where you know the whole thing is going nowhere. If there’s no conflict in your elevator pitch, odds are there won’t be any in your story either. Your reader/agent/publisher will lose interest quickly and probably not bother to pick it up.

I’ve just completed the Cornerstones ‘Edit your novel like a professional‘ course. Eighteen weeks shared with some brilliant writers – and each of us struggled when asked to condense our work into a 500 word synopsis, let alone a 20 word pitch. Writing a story is one thing – but explaining it in such a way that you get someone excited and keep them reading…now that’s another!

Pitch in secret

Try pitching your own work at home. Keep it short and snappy; no context, characters or backstory. Just the basic premise of your story: what happens, who am I writing about and why should they care? If you can create an engaging pitch like this (and of course, back it up with a great book) then chances are when you’re querying agents later on you’ll have their attention long enough to tell them more. Writing well makes all the difference when selling yourself as much as your work.

  • Know your audience and what they want from you
  • Keep it simple and engaging
  • Give away the best parts of your story

So write me something catchy. What’s your book about?

Filed Under: Submission, Tips, Writing Tagged With: Novel, Story, Submission, Tips, Writing

How to Come Up with a Book Title (That Sticks)

February 11, 2022 by Mo Fanning Leave a Comment

A title that sicks

When it comes to writing a novel, the title is one of the most important aspects. It’s what potential readers will see first, and it needs to be catchy enough to make them want to learn more. But coming up with a title that is both original and interesting can be difficult. In this blog post, I’ll discuss some tips for finding the perfect title for a book – and making sure it sticks!

First, think about what the book is about. Is it a mystery? Does it take place in space? What kind of characters are there?

Once you’ve decided on these things, then start looking at words that relate to them (or other similar topics). For example: if your character has two eyes but not one eye or three eyes – they might be called “One-Eyed Jacks.”

You could also chuck in an adjective like “spooky”.

A title with numbers

Other options include using numbers instead of letters such as ‘The Fifty Shades‘ trilogy by EL James. Or maybe even something from mythology which relates well with your story. Another option would be simply coming up with some cool sounding names for each chapter and adding those together until you create something that sounds right.

And then there’s the market. Certain titles work for certain sorts of book.

If you’re writing a book about dogs, you might come up with something like “How I Became A Dog Whisperer”. Or maybe even just call it ‘Whisper’. It all depends on who your target audience is.

Romance

Romance often needs to convey some hints about what is going to happen in the story. If you’re writing a story about an English girl who travels to America and ends up falling in love with a Native American, you might want something along the lines of “An English Girl Finds Love In The Wild West”.

Once you’ve got some ideas together, start playing around with different combinations until one particular combination feels right. Sometimes even just changing the order of words can make all the difference between sounding cool or like the kitchen-based nerd at your own party.

How do you come up with your titles? Tell me and share some tips.

Filed Under: Tips, Writing Tagged With: Novel, Story, Tips, Title, Writing

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